摘要:英語(yǔ)作文在考研里占了30分,分值和數(shù)學(xué)里的三個(gè)大題分?jǐn)?shù)相當(dāng),相比之下我們需要兩個(gè)月就能取得不錯(cuò)的收益,實(shí)在是太賺了,不過(guò),很多同學(xué)
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摘要:英語(yǔ)作文在考研里占了30分,分值和數(shù)學(xué)里的三個(gè)大題分?jǐn)?shù)相當(dāng),相比之下我們需要兩個(gè)月就能取得不錯(cuò)的收益,實(shí)在是太賺了,不過(guò),很多同學(xué)沒(méi)法拿到高分,這是因?yàn)闆](méi)掌握高分英語(yǔ)作文的規(guī)律和技巧。除此之外還要追求變化,模板不是死記硬背的。
?作文類(lèi)型以及評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
該部分由A、B兩節(jié)組成,考查考生的書(shū)面表達(dá)力。總分25分。A節(jié)題型有兩種,每次考試選擇其中的一種形式。
一、備選題型包括:
1) 考生根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)出約100詞(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi))的應(yīng)用性短文,包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等。
2) 要求考生根據(jù)所提供的漢語(yǔ)文章,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出一篇80~100詞的該文摘要??忌诖痤}卡2上作答。共10分。
B節(jié)要求考生根據(jù)所規(guī)定的情景或給出的提綱,寫(xiě)出一篇150詞以上的英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文或議論文。提供情景的形式為圖畫(huà)、圖標(biāo)或文字??忌诖痤}卡2上作答。共15分。
1. 雖然A、B兩節(jié)的考查要點(diǎn)有所不同,但對(duì)考生寫(xiě)作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)兩節(jié)都適用。但根據(jù)兩節(jié)不同的考查要點(diǎn),評(píng)分時(shí)會(huì)有不同的側(cè)重點(diǎn)。分為三類(lèi),小伙伴們認(rèn)真看。
第一檔:
小作文8-10’;大作文13-20‘
1.包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),內(nèi)容與形式統(tǒng)一,與主題相扣。
2.運(yùn)用豐富的語(yǔ)法和詞匯。
3.語(yǔ)言流程,語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤極少。
4.有效的采用多種銜接方法,文字連貫,層次清晰。
第二檔:
小作文5-6‘;大作文9-12’
1.雖然漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
2.應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法和詞匯能夠滿足任務(wù)需求。
3.有一些語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解采用簡(jiǎn)單的銜接手法,內(nèi)容連貫清晰。
第三檔:
小作文3-4‘,大作文5-8’
1.漏掉或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容和要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。
2.語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單詞匯有限。
3.有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯方面錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)內(nèi)容的理解。
4.未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址ǎ狈B貫性。
這是推薦你反復(fù)認(rèn)真琢磨的一部分,最好對(duì)照著自己平時(shí)的作文看一看,哪些地方滿足了,哪些地方還不夠。
?十句作文法
十句作文法,意思是寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文,十句話就夠了。這十句,自有其排布的規(guī)律。本篇主講議論文,別的文體有機(jī)會(huì)我們?cè)倭摹?真正的英語(yǔ)高分選手,是能把英語(yǔ)議論文作文答成填空題的,怎么說(shuō)呢?
1、什么是十句作文法?
文分三段。
第一段記敘,對(duì)給你的圖文/圖標(biāo)進(jìn)行描述,需要2句話。
第二段議論,是一句總起句,加三句論點(diǎn),每一句論點(diǎn)后面加一句論據(jù)。
第三段升華,大約是1-2句的篇幅。把文章提升至世界/社會(huì)/國(guó)家,或者個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)的層面。
如此,共十句。
2、閱卷老師閱卷時(shí)會(huì)看哪些東西呢?
他們會(huì)看:你文章的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾,然后是第二段的第一句話,你文章中用到的一些邏輯連接詞。最后大略地看看字?jǐn)?shù)、拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法等細(xì)節(jié),打分。
當(dāng)你有了這么一個(gè)詳細(xì)大綱,就可以繼續(xù)往下寫(xiě)。
3、怎么寫(xiě)?舉例說(shuō)明
答,套用萬(wàn)能句式+套用邏輯詞+填空。
♦舉個(gè)例子:
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來(lái)自英國(guó)的高中生與你校學(xué)生開(kāi)展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)?,F(xiàn)在,他們即將回國(guó),你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。
第一步,搭建框架:
?。?1) 回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)(如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面);
?。?2) 談?wù)勈斋@或感情;
?。?3) 表達(dá)祝愿語(yǔ)期望。
這就是篇典型的記敘+議論+升華地文章,題目里都點(diǎn)明白了,甚至不需要我們自己思考每段要寫(xiě)什么。
第二步,套萬(wàn)能句:
During the past two weeks, we had an unforgettable
communication with friends from England, which would last long in our mind. ……
第一段記敘概括事件。這個(gè)句子,就非常地通用。但凡是回憶性文章,幾乎都可以這么寫(xiě)。
During the past …we had an unforgettable communication with ……, which would last long in our mind. ……
句式高端而優(yōu)雅,屬于能鎮(zhèn)場(chǎng)子得分的那種。
This activity plays an important educational role in our daily life. For one thing…For another… Furthermore… In short, we have broaden our horizon and known more about the culture of different area.
第二段,寫(xiě)議論。和上面一樣,又是一些能通用的句子。而用到的“for another…furthermore…in short”也是你可以拿去用的東西。
除此,還可以用“besides”,”and also”也都很不錯(cuò)。比我們常見(jiàn)到的at first, then , finally之類(lèi)要來(lái)得好。
It is universally acknowledged that… I wish…
第三段,升華。又是一個(gè)萬(wàn)能句。眾所周知如何如何,我希望如何如何。
至此,文章的框架就已經(jīng)出來(lái)了。只剩下我們先前說(shuō)的“填空”。把題目里要求的東西塞進(jìn)去,這文章就成了。
篇幅有,邏輯有,語(yǔ)法有,升華有。這文章不拿20+,什么文章拿20+。
♦完整應(yīng)用例子:
我們寫(xiě)篇關(guān)于電視機(jī)的稿子吧,議論下這個(gè)東西的好壞。
怎么寫(xiě)呢?
第一段寫(xiě)記敘,寫(xiě)本文的背景。用兩句話。
Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.(2)
第二段,寫(xiě)議論。一句總起句,加五個(gè)短句,一個(gè)總結(jié)句。注意其中的邏輯詞。
總一句:Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. (3)
分五句:For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4) For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". (5)Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6) Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)
總一句: And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses.(8) In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)
第三段,寫(xiě)升華。用一句話搞定。
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program being produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)
?追求變化性
一、注意段首句式的變化
圖畫(huà)作文的段首句往往是"如圖所示"或"從圖畫(huà)中可以看出"之類(lèi),下面為經(jīng)常采用的一些句型:
As is shown in the picture, 和As can be seen from the picture,是經(jīng)常能看到的首句話,但是模板跡象過(guò)于明顯,所以應(yīng)該稍加升級(jí),比如添加一些結(jié)構(gòu)和修飾語(yǔ):
It is of considerable interest to see in the bizarre picture that…
當(dāng)然還可以添加一些引出話題的句子:
No one can skip the issue of…(圖畫(huà)表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的意圖)。Just as what is illustrated in the above drawing,…
二、適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)
這樣能更客觀地反映事實(shí)。
句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attent
ion should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively。
三、一句話用不同的句式來(lái)表達(dá)
為了加強(qiáng)同學(xué)們對(duì)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)在寫(xiě)作中的靈活應(yīng)用,下面給出一句話的14種句式及語(yǔ)言
調(diào)整的效果,內(nèi)容上沒(méi)有太大差異,但是請(qǐng)同學(xué)們仔細(xì)辨別每句話所側(cè)重的句式:
1.使用表語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard, and being shocked at the message. The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。
2.使用介詞短語(yǔ)
In the picture, two people are reading the announcement and they are being shocked at the message of "a sale of dead bodies" on a billboard。
3.使用疑問(wèn)句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. Why are they so shocked? The reason is that the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies"。
4.使用原因狀語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. As the billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies", they are shocked at the message。
5.使用結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句
The picture shows two people reading the announcement on a billboard. The billboard is advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" so that they are shocked at the message。
6.使用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
In the picture, while the two people are reading the announcement on the billboard about "a sale of the dead bodies", they are being deeply shocked。
7.使用分詞短語(yǔ)
In the picture, reading the message of a ‘sale of the dead bodies" advertised on the billboard, the two people are deeply shocked。
8.使用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。
9.使用There be 結(jié)構(gòu)
In the picture, there is an announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" and shocking the two people reading it。
10.使用倒裝句
On a billboard is an announcement advertising a "sale of the dead bodies". The two people reading it are being shocked。
11.使用定語(yǔ)從句
In the picture, the announcement on a billboard which advertises a "sale of the dead bodies" shocks the two people reading it。
12.強(qiáng)調(diào)句
In the picture, it is the announcement on a billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies" that shocks the two people reading it。
13.虛擬語(yǔ)氣
In the picture, were it not for the announcement on the billboard advertising a "sale of the dead bodies", the two people would not be so shocked。
14. 盡量復(fù)雜作文中的句式
It is of considerable interest to observe in this bizarre caricature that a couple of citizens, reading an announcement issued on the billboard, are taken aback as a result of the astounding message which informs people of a "sale of dead bodies"。
句中使用的詞組包括:be of considerable interest, a couple of, taken aback, as a result of, inform sb. of
長(zhǎng)句采用的特殊語(yǔ)法包括:賓語(yǔ)從句+分詞結(jié)構(gòu)做插入語(yǔ)+分詞作后置定語(yǔ)(issued)+被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)+原因短語(yǔ)+定語(yǔ)從句。
?高分萬(wàn)能句子
當(dāng)然,幫幫還會(huì)告訴你們一些必備的萬(wàn)能句子,希望能為你們所用。
一、提出問(wèn)題
1、Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern.最近,……問(wèn)題已引起人們的關(guān)注.
2、The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活中扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色.它給我們帶來(lái)了許多好處,但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題.
3、 Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口過(guò)剩)已成為我們不得不面對(duì)的問(wèn)題了.
二、引出不同觀點(diǎn)
1、People's views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人們對(duì)……的觀點(diǎn)因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為……,然而其他人卻認(rèn)為……
2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人們對(duì)待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.
3、There are different opinions among people as to …關(guān)于……,人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同.
4、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(duì)(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同。
三、文章結(jié)尾
1、All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 總之,我們沒(méi)有…是無(wú)法生活的.但同時(shí),我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來(lái)對(duì)付可能出現(xiàn)的新問(wèn)題.
四、表示提出意見(jiàn)
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢(shì)的時(shí)候了.
2、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),對(duì)……問(wèn)題應(yīng)予以足夠的重視.
五、預(yù)示后果
1、Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger. 很明顯,如果我們不能控制這一問(wèn)題,很有可能我們會(huì)陷入危險(xiǎn). 該是采納……的建議,并對(duì)……的進(jìn)展給予特殊重視的時(shí)候了。
2、It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很緊迫的是,應(yīng)立即采取措施阻止這一事態(tài)的發(fā)展.
六、列出解決辦法
1、The best way to solve the troubles is … 解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是……
2、People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人們已找出許多辦法來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題.
幫幫有話說(shuō):總結(jié)了這么多,還是得靠大家用心記,勤動(dòng)手,多思考總結(jié)。不論如何祝大家作文都拿高分!
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