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2019考研英語一真題大作文解析及范文

  52: Directions:

  Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should:

  1) Describe the picture briefly;

  2) Interpret the implied meaning, and

  3) Give your comments

  Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET.


  解析:

  雖然今年大綱對于英語一作文部分要求詞匯進(jìn)行了改變,但是,今年依然按照傳統(tǒng)考查的是圖畫的作文。B節(jié)作文的評分重點(diǎn)在于內(nèi)容完整性、文章的組織連貫性、語法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯的多樣性與語言的準(zhǔn)確性。就我看來,今年英語一大作文考查有難度。首先,圖畫的描述比較難。從表面上看,本篇作文的題目或題材似乎是大家都十分熟悉的,正如我們2004年考題類似。但實(shí)際上對考生提出了更高的要求,即加入了雙人對話的部分。。作為即將接受研究生教育的高校學(xué)生,必須學(xué)會從多樣化或較為復(fù)雜的角度來考慮和分析、解決問題,因?yàn)樯钪械脑S多問題絕非低層次作文中“問題-原因-解決”的“單一鏈條”關(guān)系那樣簡單。

  按照要求,本作文需要包括三個組成部分:(1)描述圖畫;(2)分析圖畫的用意或內(nèi)在含義;(3)就此話題表達(dá)個人的觀點(diǎn)或提出建議。

  (1)描述圖畫:描寫或描述的一般要求是“準(zhǔn)確”和“生動”。這里考慮到文章寫作的因素,還要增加一個“合理”方面的考慮。正如圖畫所描述的那樣,一個同學(xué)在選課時陷入猶豫之中。他在考慮是選擇“知識新、重創(chuàng)新和有難度”的,還是選擇“給分高、易通過和作業(yè)少”。

  (2)分析圖畫的用意或內(nèi)在含義:圖畫的描述僅僅是文章的“切入點(diǎn)”,分析才是文章的核心所在。如果說準(zhǔn)確、生動、合理是對描述的基本要求的話,那么,系統(tǒng)、深入則是對于分析得基本要求。所謂“系統(tǒng)”首先是要承接上文,以對圖畫中關(guān)于“選擇”展開分析。這樣才能保證文章從內(nèi)容到形式的系統(tǒng)性或整體性。其次,分析必須循著“選擇”這一線索展開。所謂“深入”,是指分析要透徹,要觸及問題的實(shí)質(zhì)。選擇很重要,選擇之后的堅持和努力更重要。

  (3)就此話題表達(dá)個人的觀點(diǎn)或提出建議:發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)時,重要的是要考慮到觀點(diǎn)的“中的”和“合理”。觀點(diǎn)應(yīng)切中要害、盡管本篇作文的觀點(diǎn)會因人而異,但大體上應(yīng)該包括這樣幾點(diǎn):一是合理選擇;二是堅持努力;三是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生面臨困難和挑戰(zhàn)的能力。

  同以往的命題寫作一樣,應(yīng)注意:1)突出中心。避免偏頗。2)結(jié)構(gòu)完整。三個大的組成部分不能缺少,每個組成部分所占的比重要合理。3)避免錯誤。拼寫、語法等方面要小心,盡量避免不應(yīng)有的錯誤。4)句式變換。盡量避免用同樣的句式寫作,否則會給人以單一、乏味的感覺。當(dāng)然,句式的變換不是為了變換本身,而是為了更好地表達(dá)思想,為了讀者更好地理解。5)增加“亮點(diǎn)”。寫作中應(yīng)該通過精準(zhǔn)的表述、適度的引用等方式制造“亮點(diǎn)”,以加深讀者的印象。由于考生的“讀者”就是閱卷人,這種“亮點(diǎn)”自然有利于提高作文的成績。

  范文:

  What emerges into our eyes is that there are two young men standing on the stairs of the mountain. The most impressive element is that in the right place crouches a seemingly exhausted adult with a depressed look and a few words,such as “I am tired and I want to give up.”while in the left counterpart stands an energetic adult,who is smiling to his company and passionately encouraging him to continue with the words “Don’t do that and we will reach the end with a simple rest”.

  In the real life, there is no one who can achieve the remarkable success in whatever he does without persistence. I can come up with no better illustration than the example of Thomas Edison, a distinguished scientist, who contributes his success to endless pursuing news goals. Just as he puts it, “Without continuous insistence of the conduct of experiments, I will not be so fortunate to have such a successful performance.” Apart from the example of Edison, many other great figures in the history also attributed their success to continuous pursuing something more meaningful in their lives.

  Therefore, as a qualified young people living in modern society, I value persistence as a vital principle in my lives and I am determined to insist on this point in daily life and make full use of the positive effect achieved by persistence.

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