從2015英語一真題談考研大作文的基本套路

　　亞里士多德在《詩論》中曾經(jīng)寫過這么一段話：There are, of course, five grounds on which a passage can be censured: it is impossible; it is irrational; it is immoral; it is inconsistentand it is technically at fault. 簡而言之，其實就是老師認為作文是否低劣，給出了五大評判標準：不可能、不合理、不道德、前后矛盾、技術(shù)有缺陷。
　　反映在考研作文的評分標準上，這五個標準同樣適用。不少考生背的范文不少，但是得分不高，其中原因主要包括以下幾點：1）走題、2）內(nèi)容空洞、3）邏輯混亂、4. 搭配語法錯誤多。
　　要想搞定考研英語寫作，說白了就是要解決這四大問題，在這里就結(jié)合2015年最新的大作文真題，給各位2016的考研小貓們支支招。
　　在哥看來，這考研英語的作文，有點像古代的那種八股文，每一段寫的東西都很模式化的，都很固定的，縱觀這十好幾年的真題，本質(zhì)上其實就分為三種：
　　a）積極類，比如你我一起走南闖北，半瓶水等。
　　b）消極類的，比如旅行之余，溫室花朵，養(yǎng)老足球賽。
　　c）中性類，文化火鍋，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠等。
　　但是這三種模板的三段謀篇布局是一樣一樣的。描述圖片+解釋圖片+我們該怎么辦。有時候他會讓你舉一個人物的例子，這就更簡單了，都是提前準備好的。別著急，后面都會說到，先說說這第一段。
　　第一段的話，80%的作文書，第一句準是as vividly+你看到圖中的東西，都用爛了的！喵哥不用，喵哥的弟子就是與眾不同。第一句怎么寫，按下不表，哥先說第二句。這句一般大家會寫，中文的意思是：這個東西對我們的生活產(chǎn)生深遠的影響。
　　示例：
　　Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.（64 words）
　　第二段一般是要介紹這個PP的深遠意義或者產(chǎn)生的原因，寫三條。第二段一共五句話，第一句說這個主題意義，2~4句闡述意義或者解釋原因，第五句一個總結(jié)搞定。
　　參考示例：
　　The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people's way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What's more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%. （96words）
　　最后這個例子肯定是杜撰的，但是可以放心用，不僅所有話題均適用，畢竟只要有觀點，就會有態(tài)度！第三段很簡單了，基本上全是模板上去就行了，但是要華麗麗的模板，拒絕千篇一律的垃圾模板。對于積極類的，我們要怎么讓他做得更好；消極類的，我們怎么改變這一現(xiàn)狀。
　　總結(jié)起來！
　　全文如下：
　　Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
　　The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people's way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What's more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%.
　　Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication! I believe a harmonious relationship between friends is awaiting us if we set aside our mobile phones and enjoy the untouched meal!（193 words）
　　完畢！
　　這就是我對今年的考研作文進行的一個簡單分析，歡迎各位來我的班級進行更加深入的學習。最后，往者不可諫，來者猶可追！囑托15的考研黨們一定要堅持戰(zhàn)斗到底，祝愿2016的考研黨來年好運！